Friday, 22 October 2010

Final; Front Page & Contents


1 comment:

  1. Well done Greenley - this is only a draft or two away from looking really professional.

    There's only a couple of issues that you could address to improve your grade:
    - The layout of your coverlines is a bit hit and miss
    - Not sure the text box obscuring the image on the contents page is effective.
    - New York pic doesn't really work on your cover.
    - Work towards even greater consistency in the use of your font styles
    - Use TERMINOLOGY whenever you can - it is the key to amazing marks.

    Keep up the good work, and you'll be happy with your grade at the end of the year :-)

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